Closing my eyes

When I’ve closed my eyes,
I saw and felt parts of my life.
Times where I’ve cried
having told an honest lie.
Smiling at my reflection—
believing in my own deception.
And being so demanding
for the world to notice me.

when I close my eyes,
the fragments are nowhere in sight.
I still cry—
reasons may vary as to why.
My smile’s genuine.
I can share my inner reflection.
No longer demanding,
I’ve grown to be understanding.
The world to me
is what I choose to notice
even if it were a dream.


  6 comments for “Closing my eyes

  1. March 19, 2020 at 2:14 am

    Masterpiece……there is a message to it.


  2. February 24, 2020 at 9:03 am

    I love it, this hits different.

    Liked by 1 person

    • February 24, 2020 at 9:12 am

      I’m glad man. This one of those, “spur of the moment’ posts

      Liked by 1 person

      • February 24, 2020 at 10:51 am

        Yeah, I have those ever so often, wish I could always write in these moments 😁

        Liked by 1 person

  3. February 24, 2020 at 4:52 am

    We reach many plateaus in this life. This speaks to me of one of those high places.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. February 23, 2020 at 12:07 pm

    Heartfelt and genuine poem!

    Liked by 1 person

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